Thursday, July 5, 2007

A Translation

here's a little translation really quickly...

i need to explain the title of this blog. its a verse from one of my favorite poems, a poem which is both simple and beautiful. for me thats always been what i like in a poem - not somebody showing off an incredible vocabulary because thats not soul. soul is finding the right words, simple as they may be. not too much. not too little. just enough to say exactly what you want to say and not overdo it.

jose julian marti was born on the 28th of january 1853 in havana cuba. artist, intellectual, leader of men, vanguard of a new age, "yo soy un hombre sincero [i am a sincere man]" is the most famous of his collection of poems "versos sencillos [simple verses]"

here's a quote with translation below each verse. much prettier in spanish.

yo soy un hombre sincero
de donde crece la palma
y antes de morirme quiero
echar mis versos de alma

i am a smiple man
from where the palm tree grows
and before i die, i want
to write down the verses of my soul

...todo es hermoso y constante
todo es musica y razon
y todo, como el diamante,
antes de luz es carbon...

everything is beautiful and constant
everything is music and light
and everything, like the diamond
before light is carbon

if anybody speaks spanish [raghu?] please tell me so i can practice with you...its hard to keep fluency if you dont speak.

5 comments:

Anamika said...

carbon.. woah. it is kinda kick tummy thing. muah angel. welcome back.

revelsign said...

huh? kick tummy thing...? yeah i'll post soon on the other blog, let me just think about what to write about...

Manuel A.Tellechea said...

Here's a better translation:

A sincere man am I
From the land where the palm trees grow,
And I want before I die
My soul's verses to bestow.

All is beautiful and bright,
All is as music and reason,
And as diamonds before their season,
All coal before it's light.

Arawn said...

Hey. I Googled your blog title, so I knew that story before you wrote about it. :-)

How are things?

another brick in the wall said...

i am gonna write poems on me being innocent and title it "i am an innocent man" since ppl always accuse me of doing shit that i never really do :P.. do i need those qualities (intelligent, artistic and all) in me for writing this tho? :P